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#1

Hi

If %PRODUCTNAME will get "LibreOffice" as value, this sentence sounds
poor... Has it been always like that in ancient times?

%PRODUCTNAME is derived from LibreOffice. LibreOffice is copyright ©
2000, 2012 LibreOffice contributors and/or their affiliates. All rights
reserved.

Regards
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Olivier Hallot
Founder, Board of Directors Member - The Document Foundation
LibreOffice translation leader for Brazilian Portuguese
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#2

Hi Olivier,

If %PRODUCTNAME will get "LibreOffice" as value, this sentence sounds
poor... Has it been always like that in ancient times?

%PRODUCTNAME is derived from LibreOffice. LibreOffice is copyright ©
2000, 2012 LibreOffice contributors and/or their affiliates. All rights
reserved.

This string is displayed only if %PRODUCTNAME is not LibreOffice.

Best regards,
Andras